Review: Stormdancer by Jay Kristoff

StormdancerTitle: Stormdancer (The Lotus War #1)

Author: Jay Kristoff

Publisher: Thomas Dunne Books on September 18, 2012

Source: Bought

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A DYING LAND
The Shima Imperium verges on the brink of environmental collapse; an island nation once rich in tradition and myth, now decimated by clockwork industrialization and the machine-worshipers of the Lotus Guild. The skies are red as blood, the land is choked with toxic pollution, and the great spirit animals that once roamed its wilds have departed forever.

AN IMPOSSIBLE QUEST 
The hunters of Shima’s imperial court are charged by their Shōgun to capture a thunder tiger – a legendary creature, half-eagle, half-tiger. But any fool knows the beasts have been extinct for more than a century, and the price of failing the Shōgun is death.

A HIDDEN GIFT 
Yukiko is a child of the Fox clan, possessed of a talent that if discovered, would see her executed by the Lotus Guild. Accompanying her father on the Shōgun’s hunt, she finds herself stranded: a young woman alone in Shima’s last wilderness, with only a furious, crippled thunder tiger for company. Even though she can hear his thoughts, even though she saved his life, all she knows for certain is he’d rather see her dead than help her.

But together, the pair will form an indomitable friendship, and rise to challenge the might of an empire.

I’m just going to say this here and now: if you judge Stormdancer on the merit of the first hundred pages, this would be a 2 star review, not a 4 star one. That first section of the novel is basically a giant info dump, introducing a ton of characters, recounting many stories of Shima’s gods and goddesses, and telling the legends of the famed thunder tigers. All of this information is necessary to the story, but I still feel that it could’ve been executed a lot better.

As often as she’s heard the stories, Yukiko doesn’t believe in things like gods or demons, and she certainly doesn’t believe in thunder tigers! Well, imagine her surprise when she meets Buruu, the last thunder tiger in Shima. As if that weren’t enough to bowl Yukiko right over, she quickly realizes that she and Buruu can communicate telepathically. They start off at odds but cannot resist the pull of their bond; while a thunder tiger like Buruu will never be tamed, he does come to love Yukiko. The connection between Yukiko and Buruu had a tangible effect on both of them: as Yukiko became increasingly driven by instinct and quick to anger, Buruu in turn became more intelligent and began understanding subtle human reactions. Their friendship was far and away the best part of Stormdancer.

Chi is a type of fuel made from the blood lotus, a species of plant whose mass production has taken over the entire agricultural economy. Farmers who once grew crops are being forced to grow lotus under penalty of death. Subsistence farming has essentially ceased, and the empire now relies on their colonies to supply food for the entire country.

But good news! The country’s population is dwindling thanks to the environmental effects of burning chi fuel. Skies are red from lotus pollution, toxic rain falls from the skies, and climate change is rampant. Guess we won’t have to worry about feeding those pesky peasants for much longer. But wait…what will we do when there aren’t people to work the lotus fields?!

These are the questions that young Yukiko has after being exposed to the darker aspects of the Shogunate. It isn’t hard to see the parallels between the burning of chi fuel in Stormdancer and the results of decades worth of burning fossil fuels. Kristoff is clearly an environmentalist, and I can’t say that I found fault with it. Is his message a subtle one? No. But it’s effective in its straightforwardness: if we continue to abuse the Earth, there will be serious long term consequences potentially worthy of a dystopian society.

There are some complicated family dynamics at work here, to say the least. Yukiko’s mother is absent from her life, which she’s been led to believe was a result of her father’s infidelity. So it’s not exactly surprising that Yukiko and her aunt are at odds; she is having an affair with her sister’s husband and Yukiko’s father, after all. But Yukiko eventually learns that nothing is that simple, and realizes how blind she’s been to the suffering of others. When Yukiko realizes just how much the Shogunate and the zealots of the Lotus Guild have taken from her family her fury is incredible.

It is this personal and political awakening that made Stormdancer such an enjoyable reading experience for me. Is there anything better than a flawed character realizing how blind she’s been and finally taking back her power? Actually, there is. A flawed character taking back her power with the help of her BFF, who happens to be a mythical beast of legend. The two friends plan to right the wrongs done to the people of Shima and restore the country’s original majesty.

As much as I liked Stormdancer, I have to admit that Kristoff’s prose veers towards purple a bit too often for my tastes. There were a few times when his extended metaphors and similes became slightly ridiculous and detracted from my enjoyment a bit. I love descriptive writing as much as the next girl, but it’s a little embarrassing when you can’t even be sure what the writer is even saying for the sheer number of superlatives.

Despite my gripes, I really liked Stormdancer, and would recommend it to anyone who likes steampunk and Asian-influenced SFF, and those who have the patience to slog through the first section. Here’s hoping that Kristoff’s pacing has improved, because I have high hopes for the sequel!

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  • I’ve had this book a long time and haven’t read it. The Asian theme is what interested me in the first place and it sounds like that’s interesting. I appreciate your review especially about the first part of the book. I will try to persevere and also try to not pay attention the purple prose…LOL.

    • It was slow going at the beginning, let me tell ya! But if you can push through I seriously recommend it. There just aren’t enough Asian-influenced fantasy novels out there, let alone steampunk ones!

  • I’ve also had this book for a while but haven’t had time to read it yet. Great review by the way! Thank you for letting my know that the novel does get a lot better after the initial information dump. Now I’ll have motivation to keep reading during the slower pacing at the beginning!

    I love a novel that has character growth, so I might bump this one up on my to-read list. I get bored by static characters, and even if I dislike a character at first, if they grow into a character I can sympathize with then I am most likely going to enjoy the book a lot.

    • I’m glad I could warn you – I was warned about the info dumping via twitter and the warning helped me dig deep and plod through that first section. Yukiko definitely becomes a more likeable character as time goes by; can’t wait to see what she’s like in the sequel!

  • “Veers towards purple” I don’t think I’m familiar with this expression! But I know what you mean by his distracting prose, it took me a while to get used to it and I was tempted to skim all the chunky descriptive paragraphs to get to the important stuff. But I loved this book, I loved its sequel, and I can’t wait for you to read it because so much OMG happens. I can’t wait for book three.

    ~Mogsy @ BiblioSanctum

    • That was just my fancy way of saying that his prose is *almost* purple, haha. Purple prose is really flowery and ornate writing and it’s not considered a compliment! But it had to be said. I’m seriously SO EXCITED for Kinslayer…I have some theories about OMG related things and I’ll let you know if they pan out.

  • It’s crazy how much the last half on a novel can really make or break your opinion of it. It’s better than the alternative though, because at least that way it ends on a high note. I’ve been on a bit of a Steampunk kick lately, and thought that this book was strictly SFF, so thanks for making me give Stormdancer a second look.

    • Too true! I’d much rather be pleasantly surprised by something that’s initially bleh than let down by something that started strong. There are definitely some cool steampunk elements and lots of cool gadgets. One particularly cool one is the breathing mask that many people wear to protect them from the poor air quality that’s come from burning chi fuel.

  • The concept seems very original and interesting. The info dumb really bugs me though and the ridiculous or incomprehensive metaphors as well. But I probably would end up enjoying it a bit, maybe not as much as you did that’s for sure since those two tings can break a book for me. Great review! 😀

    • Thanks Lola! I can forgive a book a lot so long as there’s character growth and a spunky heroine. Plus a telepathic thunder tiger doesn’t hurt. 😉

  • Anya E. J.

    So I was only so so on Stormdancer for that writing just like you said but OMG book two improves sooooooooo much!!

    • AHHHHH YAY! I feel like this series has so much potential and I’m dying to know what Kin’s horrific vision of the future is. I have some theories and I need to know if I predicted correctly!!

  • Wonderful review hun 😀 I’m not a huge fan of info-dumps and the cover looks kickass, but I’ll have to pass on this one. There are more turn offs than ons.

    Thanks for the post!

    • That’s fair! Stormdancer probably isn’t for everyone what with its slow start. I was sucked in by the gorgeous cover art right away – especially Yukiko’s tattoos. So badass – and beautiful!

      • I love me some great tattoos 😀